It makes drunk driving more serious than it is.
It assumes the innocence of humanity.
It makes the death penalty seem like the only proper punishment.
Should be "rised taxes"
Unsupported connection between the raising of taxes and the crime rate.
Comma should come after Jones.
Animal experimentation does not actually lead to war or murder.
"To prevent this terrible consequence" should come after "right now."
Civilization should be capitalized.
There should not be a comma after yet.
The similarities between guns and hammers do not have anything to do with the main concern of gun safety.
Ridiculous is not used properly.
Actor should be capitalized.
"Abolish" is not used properly.
Mr. Handsome's opinion does not necessarily make something true.
"is representing" should be represents.
Neighborhood should be capitalized.
A comma should come after Jerusalem.
"the holy Spirit is not a force" is awkward.
"is not a force that can be controlled" is awkward.
"and that is something hard to promote." is awkward.
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