Is Your Naruto Original Character A Mary Sue?

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Is Your Naruto Original Character A Mary Sue? - Quiz

This judges whether or not your character is a mary sue (an overpowered character that gets everything they want, which the fandom usually hates).


You May Get

Total Sue

Your character is most likely a mary sue.  the typical signs of a mary sue are being overpowered, having canon characters immediately liking and agreeing to everything they say, or being easily forgiven.  Other common signs of a mary sue are being the best in everything they do, and having insanely powerful abilities.  You may want to make your character seem a bit more real, or just completely start over with a new character.

Getting pretty close

While your character does have some believable traits, they do have some sue-ish qualities.  A mary sue may not be bad if written correctly, but you're cutting a pretty fine line there.  One suggestion would be to make your character have a few bad traits, not just insane skills.

Just right

Good job!  You have a believable character who had both good and bad traits.

Maybe a bit plain

While your OC is most definitely not a mary sue, they could also use a little spicing up.  You could try giving them cool jutsus, or a more complex personality.  Theres a lot of possibilities out there, so branch out!

You may want to be a bit nicer....

Sometimes, when trying to create a character that isn't a mary sue, you end up with someone who is just...evil.  They may have cool jutsus, but they're a complete jerkass, aren't sympathetic at all, and has everyone hating them.  In reality, this can be just as bad as a real mary sue.  You may want to give them a sympathetic backstory, or make them someone who secretly does care.
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Questions and Answers
  • 1. 
    What are the abilities of your character?
    • A. 

      The bijuu of some never-before seen tailed beast, or coming from some strange superpowerful clan no one has ever seen before.

    • B. 

      Haven't really thought about it. Average, I guess.

    • C. 

      Fairly good at one area (ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjutsu), or has balanced stats.

    • D. 

      Extremely good at all areas, and most of the elements.

    • E. 

      They can't use any jutsu anymore because they were crippled from birth and have lived a sad and depressed life.

  • 2. 
    What would you describe as their appearance and personality?
    • A. 

      Very pretty, but a bad personality (or vice versa). Alternatively, moderately pretty and a nice guy in general.

    • B. 

      Dark and brooding, always whining or depressed.

    • C. 

      Very pretty, has boys going after all. Also has a great, likeable personality (again, not all these traits are bad!)

    • D. 

      Um, they're okay, I guess.

    • E. 

      Unique eye color (purple, pink gold). Exotically beautiful, with a strange hair color. Everyone fights over being able to go out with your character.

  • 3. 
    How do you describe your character?  These are all examples, so don't choose based on the traits, choose based on how much detail you go into when describing your character.
    • A. 

      I am a (male/female) ninja wearing a typical uniform. My name is ______.

    • B. 

      I have flowing golden blond hair, and bright blue eyes that remind everyone of spring! I'm Naruto s long lost twin sister! My name is Ukugaki Maruko!

    • C. 

      I have black hair that goes everywhere, and NO ONE understands me. Why do they hate me? I'm...I'm better off dead. Why? WHY?!

    • D. 

      My name is Seraphina Delanatrus Glizam! I have bright green hair that reaches my waist, and people have called my the most beautiful/handsome person in the world. I have deep purple eyes that can pierce your very soul, and I move very gracefully, like a cat! I'm secretly from the Kawakura clan, who uses special genjutsu that are even more powerful than sharingan!

    • E. 

      My name is Hyuuga Haru. I have black hair and the byakugan eyes. I guess I'm kind of short for my age.

  • 4. 
    Your character's backstory involves: 1.  Being raped.  2.  A doomed village.  3.  Abusive parents.  4.  They lost their memory.  5.  They are really from "our" world.  6.  Dead parents/friends.  7.  Someone close to them killed by a canon character.Your character's backstory has...
    • A. 

      1-2

    • B. 

      3-5

    • C. 

      1-7

    • D. 

      None (Not always a bad thing. Plenty of good characters can lead normal lives.)

  • 5. 
    How do characters react to your OC?  *hint:  If characters who do not like your OC are immediately categorized as "bad," you may have a mary sue on your hands.
    • A. 

      "They're so amazing! What a powerful jutsu!" "They've gone through so much, yet they're still so nice." "Wow, they're really powerful. I wish I was like them!" "I instantly agree to everything they say." "Anyone who doesn't like them is a jerk!" "They're so beautiful! What amazing skin! And eyes that can pierce the heavens!"

    • B. 

      "They're ok, I guess."

    • C. 

      "They're kind of rude sometimes, though I guess they have their moments." "Huh, they're pretty nice."

    • D. 

      "Why are they always so depressed?" "Do they hate themselves that much/" "Why do they always have to hate everything?"

    • E. 

      "Wow, its no wonder everyone likes them!" "Who couldn't love them?"

  • 6. 
    They...
    • A. 

      Are close friends with a canon character, but also dislike several other canon characters.

    • B. 

      Have a bunch of characters (canon and oc) flocking to them, all in love. Everyone who they don't like is automatically a jerk.

    • C. 

      Are a ninja.

    • D. 

      Lived a sad, depressing life, and everything always goes wrong for them.

    • E. 

      Are part of a prophecy, and all the characters love them. They can even reform completely evil characters such as Madara. The story revolves around them.

  • 7. 
    Again, not all these traits are bad.  You just don't want to overdo it too much.Your character is...
    • A. 

      Based on yourself

    • B. 

      Um...I haven't really though about it.

    • C. 

      Based on your ideal self, or is someone you would go out with.

    • D. 

      Based on the person you hate

    • E. 

      Has some of your traits, but also has their own unique bits as well.

  • 8. 
    Do you think you have a sue?
    • A. 

      Yes, I really need to scrap it now X(

    • B. 

      No, I think I'm ok.

    • C. 

      Maybe...

    • D. 

      Nope. Though I guess they could have a bit more personality.

    • E. 

      Ha! I love tormenting my character!

  • 9. 
    Do you feel as if this quiz is insulting you?  ( Generally, if it does, this means that the character is largely based on you or your ideal self aka mary sue)
    • A. 

      Yes! Definitely!

    • B. 

      No.

    • C. 

      Yes.

    • D. 

      Maybe a bit.

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