Is Your Antagonist Or "bad Guy" A Mary Sue/gary Stu?

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Mary Sue Quizzes & Trivia

A test to see if your fanfiction, original fiction or roleplaying antagonist is a Mary Sue or Gary Stu. Don't know what a Mary Sue is? Read here before continuing: http://www. Springhole. Net/writing/whatisamarysue. Htm


Questions and Answers
  • 1. 
    Does your character have an abnormal hair colour (blue-black, red, white, "pitch-black")   that is not regular to their race?
    • A. 

      Yes

    • B. 

      No

    • C. 

      Yes, but it is a box dye.

  • 2. 
    Does your character have a strange sounding name, one that is not regular in its culture?
    • A. 

      Yes

    • B. 

      No

    • C. 

      It's a different spelling of a regular name.

    • D. 

      Yes, and I made it up myself.

  • 3. 
    Does your character wear a lot of leather, furs, black, red, or abnormally tight-fitting clothes?
    • A. 

      Yes to all.

    • B. 

      Yes to four.

    • C. 

      Yes to three.

    • D. 

      Yes to two.

    • E. 

      Yes to one.

    • F. 

      None.

  • 4. 
    Does your character particularily hate children or bubbly people?
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.

  • 5. 
    Is your character a professional torturer?
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.

    • C. 

      No, but he knows how to and is good at torture.

  • 6. 
    Does your character have, "Dark" or "Death" in their name? Do people often call them something like that?
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.

    • C. 

      Yes, but it is relevant to species / I'm writing about the Grim Reaper, literally.

  • 7. 
    Does your character have constantly greasy hair even though they live in a time where they have access to a shower?
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.

  • 8. 
    Does your character always smell bad, or like "death" for some unknown reason? Exception: They only smell bad to a certain race or they have no access to a toothbrush, deoderant stick or shower, or you are literally writing about Death (Grim Reaper).
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.

  • 9. 
    Do they have a very witty sense of humor and are always capable of tossing the best comebacks, or on the opposite, do they have no sense of humor whatsoever and are very stoic?
    • A. 

      Yes to both.

    • B. 

      Yes to one.

    • C. 

      No.

  • 10. 
    Do you ever describe them as having "sharp features" or "eyes that gleam of death/malicious intent/their true hatred"?
    • A. 

      Yes to one.

    • B. 

      Yes to both.

    • C. 

      No.

  • 11. 
    Were they ever abused, and now they're only the way they are because they "don't know any better" or "never got over the pain"?
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.

  • 12. 
    Do you ever describe their look as "goth", "steampunk", "emo", "punk", "greaser", or "gangster"?
    • A. 

      Yes.

    • B. 

      No.