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Is Your Protagonist A Mary Sue?

40 Questions  I  By Superheronation
Is Your Protagonist a Mary Sue?
This quiz will help you identify whether a character is an over-perfect Mary Sue and how to fix him.   The quiz typically takes 10 minutes or so.  

  
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1.  Does the character make any moral decisions that readers will probably disagree with?  For example, Peter breaks up with Mary Jane for her safety at the end of the first Spiderman movie. 
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2.  How many languages does this character speak?
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3.  Is this character secretly related to another character?
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B.
4.  Is this character a furry?  A furry is an animal that walks and talks and is (except for his body) otherwise indistinguishable from a human. 
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B.
5.  Does this character have problems with authority figures?  (For example: his parents, his bosses, the police, etc.) 
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B.
6.  Is the character a rebellious member of a high-class family?
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B.
7.  Does this character look much younger than he actually is?  (For example, he might be a 300-year-old that looks 20). 
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B.
8.  Does this character use a sword or other bladed weapon in a high-tech setting? 
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B.
9.  Is this character the last survivor of anything?  (Common examples include a species, family, town or civilization).  
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B.
10.  Is the character a hybrid of two species, like a half-elf or half-dragon?
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B.
11.  Is the character royal or otherwise a member of a ruling family?
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B.
12.  Does this character's weapon have a name?
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B.
13.  Is this character name's Hunter or anything you find to be particularly badass?
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B.
14.  Does the character ever make a decision readers will probably find unintelligent?  For example, Harry Potter recklessly flew a car to Hogwarts instead of telling an adult when he missed the train. 
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B.
15.  Is this character human?
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B.
16.  Is there any aspect of this character's personality that you expect readers will find unlikable? 
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B.
17.  At the start of the book, does this character know who his birth parents are?
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B.
18.  If the character has political or religious beliefs similar to yours, does he convert any other characters to these beliefs or defeat an opponent of these beliefs?
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B.
19.  Does this character date any of the following: an elf, a royal or someone high-class?
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B.
20.  Does this character ever get defeated by an opponent or obstacle?
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B.
21.  Does the character have political or religious beliefs similar to yours?
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B.
22.  Does this character consider his talents and/or abilities a curse?
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B.
23.  Does this character have a particularly traumatic backstory?  (For example, his parents were murdered or she was captured by slavers, etc.) 
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24.  Is this character very modest?
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B.
25.  Does this character have the job you have (or a job you wish you had)? 
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26.  Are your other characters generally impressed by this character? 
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B.
27.  Does this character wear leather, sunglasses or anything you find to be particularly badass?
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B.
28.  Is this character mortal?
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29.  Are this character's parents/guardians abusive or otherwise nasty?
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30.  Does this character ever get out of a tight spot by discovering new powers or abilities? 
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31.  Is this character the subject of a great prophecy?
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32.  Was this character born with an impressive supernatural talent, like magic or The Force? 
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33.  If your character is nonhuman, is there any way in which his species is weaker than humans?
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34.  Does this character feel overwhelming guilty about something that wasn't his fault?
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35.  Can this character polymorph or otherwise change species?
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B.
36.  Is this character originally from the 20th or 21st century real-world but somehow transported to a fantasy realm?
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37.  Is this character ever raped or tortured?
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B.
38.  Is this character notably good-looking?
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B.
39.  Is your character a non-human that looks mostly human anyway?
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40.  Was this character born into a powerful rank, position or caste?
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